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My Sweet 18 | PotatoPhil | 3

 

You remember, you were at work, your girlfriend was sitting at a table, and you were chatting with her, when two men burst in the door with guns ablaze and started shooting. Their yes fell on your girlfriend and you chatting with her. Like they had been practicing, they pounced, one binding you, the other binding your girlfriend. They drove you off into the woods, where they removed your blindfold and forced you to watch as they violently raped your girlfriend to death. All the while you were trying to cut yourself free. You succeeded and picked up a rock to smash their heads in. You smashed their schools and grabbed your gf, she was bloody, and had clearly been stabbed. You stayed kneeling with her and your arms for a along time before some hikers found you. As soon as as they saw you, they called the cops. They had to pry her from your cold hands, they had to cut her clothes free from you as the blood had glued your hands to them. You tried to continue, but you couldn't, something weird stopped you from continuing to remember. Then, you woke up

 

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